In Fields Beyond
my vision, celery flats ruled.Sometimes late at night, I'd stopmy car and listen, not surewhat I expected to hear.Maybe the whispering of stalks. If it happened to be autumn, everyone up and down...
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celery -- good for heartburn during pregnancies try present tense:- my vision, celery flats rule. [Sometimes] late at night, I stop my car and listen, not sure what I expect to hear. Maybe the...
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H---this poem has elements, the building blocks i like in most poems: a narrator's clear voice, a central image that is both immediate and still retaines a slightly ambiguous interpretation (the...
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hard for me to imagine celery whispering, H. (pulls too much focus to the speaker?) murmering, maybe. (that suggests to me more some secret code or message) sissing ? -- yes: I can picture the leaves...
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Hi, I like the image and how the celery flats set the borders. Also the specificity of a particular street and the smouldering piles of leaves at the curb. Everything here for me is pale green. I also...
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Hadley, if I remember correctly you had been working on this earlier, I know it sounds very familiar. I'm not sure about the connection of celery fields to battle zone either; perhaps, drives home...
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Well I confess I never worked the celery fields myself But lived in Kalamazoo No one likes the war zone. Ok. The image was suppose to come from the piles of fall leaves that everyone burned on the...
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